TUGAS ESSAY WRITING (GENERAL ESSAY)
SRI WIJI LESTARI
K2-2013
Paragraph writing experience
Welcome to essay writing! It will be a challenge for me
in my third semester. As I know, writing seems like an easy to do, right? But
it is not like that. It needs many processes to make my writing become perfect.
For example, I need to choose what the topic first and also the grammar will be
used. I also develop my ideas to be coherence to read by the reader.
I still remembered when I studied paragraph writing with
mr. Saunir. My friends and I were asked to make a paragraph based on the type
such as, a descriptive paragraph, contrast and comparison paragraph,
cause-effect paragraph, etc in each meeting. Then, one of the students stood in
front of the class to explain her paragraph, and the other students gave
advices and comments on hers. I think to make a paragraph is easy; in fact, my
friends and I still had many mistakes on our paragraph. The mistakes included the
grammar, the ideas, and the incoherent between one paragraph to the others.
After giving advices and comments by us, many advices and
comments were given by my friends. Then, we argued each others, but mr. Saunir
just let it be. He ever said, “Let your opinion and your mind appear, but you need
to remember not to be selfish. You also need to hear the others”. Afterwards, at the end of the class, he
gave the truth about what we argued and
explained it.
At the end of the semester, paragraph to paragraph and
essay to essay which we made have done. It must be press like a book, then it
was handed to him to be assessed. And guess what did I get on my paragraph
writing? I got a B. I am really grateful for it, I hope in essay writing I can
improve my ability and get the highest score. Amin.
Your essay was good but i still found some grammatical errors such as i were, actually you should write i was.
BalasHapusok winda, but which paragraph did you find the grammatical errors?
Hapusthere are still few errors in spelling like 'conclussions' etc and capitalization. Please pay attention to the every single small details. Well done!
BalasHapusthaks sa :D
HapusI will correct it.
what a good essay, but be careful with your grammar .
BalasHapusok kk, but in paragraph what that you mean?
HapusHeyy ngauu, your essays need more, applause! :D hahahaha. you did a great writing, :D
BalasHapusreally? thaks pai :D
Hapusin writing rules, it as not allowed to use "coordinating conjunction" at the begining of our sentence, and i found it on your text. Then, after you use "the mental process" you'd better to make punctuation. You may use "adjective clause" in explaining your sentence. For example : My second point is that.......
BalasHapusthanks nyil :)
HapusBe careful about capitalization. If you want to use person, actually mr you should use capitalization to be Mr. Thanks, your essay is great :)
BalasHapushahah, Ok ndi. thanks :)
Hapusgood essay tarii...
BalasHapusbe careful in your garammatical ok..:)
ok ya, I try as I could ;)
Hapusgreat essay tari, but I found some grammatical error, good luck Tar
BalasHapusokeey van, what paragraph did you mean?
HapusTari ,my cutenest daughter, your essay was great but i found some grammatical error. So please pay attention on it.Keep practicing and learning more. :D
BalasHapushahaha, yeah my sweaty amak :*
Hapusokey, I will try to practice and learn more.
careful with capitalization letter..
BalasHapusokey opa, btw, thanks ;)
Hapusit better for you to check again you essay,tar... there are something wrong.. enjoy your essay..
BalasHapusokey leni, but could you tell me where the wrong is?
Hapuspay attention with your grammar tar :)
BalasHapusbut it a great essay :)
okey, thanks ya
Hapus